Gah, I love this side of Naomi so much, and especially the way you show her.

Just ... like, what the fuck am I doing, and who am I now. So she just, doesn't quite say "fuck it", but also doesn't try and change anything that's going wrong, at least not at first. Just drifts along and with Effy that's just the natural reaction.

Also, I adore Naomi/Effy as a pairing. I agree with Sivi that, at least until you write it to prove me wrong, I'm not sure they could be in love. But as a confused, drift-y sort of ... thing.

Actually, fuck that. They would never have that sort of epic love thing that Emily and Naomi have, but I could easily see them just falling ... slowly. There would always be the feeling of it being a second-choice for Naomi, or at least this kind of lingering sadness. But then that feeling seems to follow both Effy and Naomi individually, so it makes sense that together they'd be a bit lost in life, cause they really are soulmates in many ways, romantically or not.

I just love their dynamic, and a lot is added by them being together, namely that Naomi understands Effy like no one else.

Basically, LOVE. Moar Effy/Naomi please.